by MicheleNylons
Love where the story is going. I can defiantly imagine a taboo scene between Wendy, Delores, and Wendy's estranged father.
What you put into your stories is so much (not ott ) detail which lets the reader picture the story better . Love this series, thank you 🙏
i so love this story, and so jealous of wendy , cant wait to read more
Excellent writing, pacing and build up. I do agree that the beauty is in the details, but not overly detailed. Can't wait for Ch. 05
You managed to totally take this story to another level. You managed to explain a multitude of questions that were posed earlier in the series and yet you did it in such a clever and natural way that it in no way seemed forced.
A wonderful chapter adding to a creatively wonderful story. Another 5 star success.
This story is fun and hot. And it has a lot of depth and direction. I would enjoy seeing Anthony make a woman out of Wendy that his/her mother could be proud of. Wendy would make a great smoking wife for a nice villain like Anthony.