All Comments on 'Walkabout'

What the hell kind of ending is that? Three well constructed pages, although a bit overloaded with sex, and then a sudden ending? And to mess up Peggy’s name with the climactic proposal? 4 *

Jeez, anybody's sweater but Marchand's!! Great story up until then, kind of ruined when you even mention The Rat.

I can't understand that reacttion. To me it was a natural finish ro a lovely love story. Thet took lonrt to commit than me and my wife ;) since 46 years.

Was looking for a physical description of the MCs, of any type, and it wasn't there. Didn't feel like much of a romance, she kind of steam-rolled him. Very abrupt ending.

The middle and end came as a surprise after the somewhat stock beginning ... a good read.

I loved it. 5* from me.

Everyone should find their soulmate in a Scittish Pub. Well Done 5*'s

Love the story. It is very good. AAAAAA++++++

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A Beautiful Story, Beautifully Written!

11/10 Bruins Jerseys!!!!!

Wonderful warm story.

It was ok, but I enjoy stories with more romance and less sex. This story is about 75% sex. It gets old.