by fgmntfmgnshn
Absolutely fantastic story. Make a fantastic Hollywood movie! Well done! Can't wait for the next chapter keep them coming!!
the story would have been better without the complete nonsense of the water-based anti-oil device. Or maybe it would fit better in the fantasy category, or humor. Within the realm of known physics, water is not a feasible energy carrier.
Was a decent read about rushed but still enjoyable just need more of Tsukiumi with hopefully a happy ending.