All Comments on 'Wall Between Us'

That was a nice little story, thanks.

How simple and lovely. Tack själv. Your command of English is excellent. But "I reckon" did not ring true as a phrase for her, too colloquial. Maybe better would have been " I think." The other sounds more like a hillbily or a cowboy, not a phrase picked up in England but from a movie. Otherwise flawless. Not much backstory for either character but understandable with their brief acquaintance. Maybe in chapter 2? Their story should continue.

Loved it

This was so sweet! Well done!

A really sweet, well-written tale which leaves the reader with hope for their future. Great job and best wishes in the contest.

Please continue on with this story.

Fever, asthma attack, no food, weak as a kitten etc and she wanted sex? Hardly believable. Usually just a slight headache is enough to cool a woman’s ardour.

A very good, heart-warming story. Give Samuel some description here. I know he is shy, but he seems a well-put-together man, maybe with a dusting of sexy chest hair for his manly body? That might make things exciting for Johanna.

5 stars

A nice low key romance. Fun people having fun sex.

This is a marvelous story! Please consider writing more about this couple! It was sweet it was incredibly erotic, I was happy for both the characters and for Musse! Well done!

your story made me smile, I hope there will be more coming soon

A very good romance story. Love the build up. The unsuredness of each of the characters. Good job

I enjoyed your story, it has a sweet tenderness that is perfect for Valentine's Day. I think I enjoyed the cat the most — I could just picture Musse doing what cats do so well — ignore us. No complaints, just praise from me.

A nice story. Hope it continues.

Sweet story. Kindness, gentleness, sweet follow-up. Cute business with the cat.

Uh wow, I still have more questions than answers. Is Johanna really sick?::If so, how sick? Why is Johanna at once terribly reserved, even secretive, and yet so uninhibited and forward? Is this a trap?

That was so sweet. Thanks for sharing it.

Warm,carting and human...and gratifying erotic.

Very nice story.

Short but intense. Like a small jewel

Sorry...but the holes in this one get me trying to fill in the gaps. She has an ethereal quality, a cat, and her illnesses all seem to point to a Alva or Swedish Fae, With this as a start. this would make a really interesting series.

Tarinasi maalaavat kauniita kuvia sanoilla. Luen niitä lisää.

Good story!

5

A good story but didn't quite resonate with me. Thought Samuel was very caring but think he should have resisted sex with her until she was well. Still good enough to consider a sequel.

Just what I needed this evening - some light hearted romance TY

Very sweet romance, a damsel, and cat, in distress, it all went together well.

I thought that this was a sweet little love story.

It’s been said that “women need to feel loved before having sex while men need to have sex before feeling love!”

Whether true or not, this story is a perfect example of that saying…Johanna felt loved as Samuel did his best to take care of her in an unsolicited way. Samuel felt loved after Johanna unexpectedly had sex with him. (Sorry if this is a spoiler for anyone who reads the Reviews before reading the story.)

We may never know whether or not this “love” lasts…although for both their sakes, the romantic in me hopes it does.

A bery sweet warm tale ….. yes coming out of your own shell and taking care for someone is may a big step, but friendship will be the least and so unexpected appears …. Lovely