All Comments on 'Wallflower Girl'

And I think a sequel would be absolutely lovely!

YES!...I agree would love to see a sequel on the development of Anne and Drew's relationship.

Your story made an old psychiatrist cry with happiness. Superb writing!

blah blah boring...get to the point...slowly....not giving us so much about nothing

Anyone who thinks this story is boring must never have experienced a love like the one portrayed here. Beautiful. Please keep writing.

Negative anons are just wasting their time by leaving comments - it's like some idiot yelling as they drive by, there's no value in their gibberish.

Beautiful, touching story - AGB, I sincerely hope you keep writing.

i hope you go on.

This one of the most compelling story I've read here. I wish you could Anne and drew story.

I was a bit confused at first when she had that déja-vu experience and waking in another's body. This was somewhat explained a bit further. A nice second story from this new author.

This story is beyond great. It's a beautiful tale of two lovers. The raw passion, untamed love and sheer belonging described between the two was applaudable. Their death brought a tear to my eye. Amazing story.

Awesome a true stroke of genius. Very creative and inchanting I have never read anything like this please keep your creative genius up look forward to a lot more beautiful story's from you.

Just wanted to leave a note of thanks to all who have left a vote, and, in particular, to those kind enough to say a few words. I am very happy to learn Wallflower Girl is being enjoyed by you all... your feedback is my reward.

This story is so well written. It also touches on my own philosophy of reincarnation please continue to share your talent.

Well written, intriging, captivating. A very good read. Fine story-line. I see a great opportunity for a sequel and more about the rose colored beads.....

This is a great read. Thank you for sharing with us. A sequel would be wonderful. What happens to them? Do the beads play a role in their or Ethel's future? ... So many questions so little ... we'll you know.

OMG, so good! You made me cry (in a good way).

Such a lovely, moving story. Thank you for sharing it! I, too, would love to read more about Anne and Andrew. Please consider a sequel.

Keep up the good work... :)

I liked the story, as far as I got. I was looking forward to seeing the”wallflower” bloom into a beautiful woman. But then the story ventured into the supernatural realm, and that was it for me. I like romance stories, but I don’t care for any story that goes into supernatural type “stuff”. Certainly no reflection on the story or the author, just my personal tastes.

This was such a lovely story - you have a gift for storytelling ! Some people in these comments clearly have no appreciation for real stories. Your writing is very good - the tension you built in the deja vu portions was incredibly well executed ! I couldn’t help but draw comparisons to the great Flannery O‘Connor ! Well done - this reads as a very polished short story. As much as I, like several others, would love to experience the modern relationship as it unfolds, you did an excellent job of ending it where you did and creating a short story full of hope. I honestly think you should be considering getting into publishing - if this is any indication of what you are capable of, a longer work would be well worth publishing and getting out there ! You are talented - best of luck in your future writing endeavors !