All Comments on 'Waltz Through the Corridors of Time'

Loved it and your writing and character development. I am hopeful this is the first of a series. I would love to see the continuing adventures.

Very interesting story, strong characters and a good story line. Now, you need to work on a sequel and your future writings are endless. How do I know that? Easy, my mind has touched you through this story. LOL

I loved it. I like your strong character development, and the characters are very likable. The story is rich with authentic details. Best of all, it’s a clever and interesting story!

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

fantastic, super powers and restoring a house all in the same story!

Very good story I enjoyed reading it and I loved the character development and the story. I hope this isn't the end of the story and I look forward to reading more in the future.

Very good. Enjoyed that story.

Excellent. Amazing start with characters being carefully drawn. Surely, there's more to flow.

This was a good story. Interesting plot, and didn't overdo the erotic parts. Author needs to be careful about switching between first and third person narration. It happened a few times, it can be confusing. Too bad about the lack of a sequel.

Great story. There’s no such thing as “Hindi” people. Hindi is the dominant language of Northern India. You may want to use the term Hindu instead. Thank you for a enjoyable 5 star read. — NotAristotle

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Really enjoyed your stories. This in particular could really lead to some great follow ups.