All Comments on 'Waltz Time'

There are so many "stroke" stories with an incest theme. It is so good to read a truly sensitive, yet erotic, account of what can be so-tender a relationship.

I always enjoy your work. Thank you. Incidentally, I am a married male, age 71.

Yes, A very good story, please continue..

Paul

I love your stories in which a young guy makes his mother pregnant, including this latest one. When girls outside his family fail to fulfill his fantasies, he ultimately falls back on his mother. Blood is indeed thicker than water!

Moondrift,

You have a fine style and a great ability to tell a tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Father this, Father that, freak'n long winded story and to little of the build up to mom and son, quit whinning over that "Father:

Please get to the point (sex) a little sooner next time. People reading incest stories aren't interested in 2-1/2 pages of story leading up to a 1/2 page of lame sex.

Was truly shocked to read your story.

It had romance, seduction, beautiful imagery, a gentle erotic build up. What the heck was it doing on this site, where so many seem to be satisfied with a quick fuckfest within the 1st paragraph!!

Story was wonderful, you really know how to seduce, and the build up was just delicious. Well done for such a rare talent - It was a treat to read, and I'm envious....

Boring too long

Forget all the Nay sayers that found this story too long. They are only looking for a quick sexual release. I found this story to be filled with an awakening of love and passion that should be enjoyed for it's merit. I hope to see more works like this.

Too much buildup and not enough action. It's like a car salesman who talks about the car for hours, but only lets you drive it for one minute!

It's an excellent story. I just wish there was more of it.

Makes such a change from some of the sordid filth thats written about incest.

...with other user comments. Excessive description of his father going downhill. To have a full page of that, then only to get into the boy seeing his new 'lover' on page 2 and finally to the sex on page 3... Well, please spend more time describing his/her feelings about the sex, as one would have expected more description from her being a teacher and from him being at least of above avg. intelligence. There was a lot of potential for this story, especially for it being his first time. If you write another like this, spend more time describing the sex and the sensations for both. This kind of account could be super hot if you get the 'formula' right. ;)

Your language is very refreshing; the element of humour with regards to the bloody-minded attitude of a young male - me too! - had me giggling and, if the truth be known, blushing.

I don't like the me that existed then; your description fitted very well.

You have written a beautiful love story.

Thank you.

Peter

Unlike many of the comments below, I did enjoy the 2 1/2 pages that set the tone for what else developed. I thought you weaved an excellent tale, and I agree with a comment below - it would be nice to see this story develop. Thank you for writing it. Cheers, Michael

I gave this Story top marks. You actually told a story rather than the usual misspelled description of sex acts.

Good mother son stories should be loving.

A long term love affair between them with having brought a child into the world through their love. Just a great story, which was presented perfectly. Thanks.

very refreshing....!!! good play of words.... such entertaining....!!

This story is exactly what such stories should be about. Namely love.

For God's sake keep writing stories like this. There is still hope in this miserable world.

IT IS PERFECT. DO NOT STOP WRITING LIKE THIS. I COULD READ IT FOREVER.

IT WAS A GOOD READ, TWO AND A HALF PAGES OF LEAD IN .AND HALF PAGE OF ACTION. THE HALF PAGE WAS WORTH IT. BUT FATHER COULD HAVE DIED IN THE FIRST PARAGRAPH .AND THEY COULD HAVE DANCED AND FUCKED FOR THE LEAST TWO PAGES. . LAROC OF AGES

It is truly heartwarming when a boy gets his fine fat cock up the same hole he came out of. It's his own birth canal, after all, and he has the right to plug his prick into it, oh, say, for old times' sake. I agree with the perceptive commenter, R. M. Roxinger, that it's wonderful when the boy unloads his young balls, floods his mother's cunt with his creamy semen, and fucks a baby up where he was once a baby. Can you imagine the bursting boyish pride of the grinning young motherfucker? And the loving pride of his mother in her virile manly son, his big mommy-pleasing prick, and his potent young balls.

What a naive and childish bullshit :)))

Only children are commenting that??

The half page of action is definitely not enough for a positive opinion..

but that is typical of teenage males who think they know all the answers and are so arrogant with it......amazing that she bothered with him...but then mother love is a strong bond so at least they finally got to fuck each others brains out...vice is nice but incest is best especially when you get your mom, sister, aunt or daughter pregnant......

I liked yours but it wasn't the same for my mother and me. Until I was big and strong enough to kick his ass and then literally throw him out of the house, my dad was a mean bastard to my mom and me. I got home to him beating on my mom after I'd told him what I'd do to him if he ever laid another hand on her. I beat him unconscious, took his keys, threw him out into the driveway and then called the police and had him arrested for assaulting my mother. She was bruised and bleeding.... He was far worse. He never knew what hit him because I'd worked out hard on weights and the heavy bag while planning what I did to him. They kept mom in the hospital for two days. When she came home, I made her sign all the papers to press charges, just as I had. That night, after she went to bed, I got into bed with her and before she had a chance to organize a resistance, I was between her legs, my cock was in her pussy and I'd already started fucking her. I said, "I sleep here, now. Your pussy is mine, from now on and I'll be the one who's fucking it. NOBODY will ever hit you again." After a few 8 1/2" strokes, she was fucking me back, getting really juicy, as her ass started rotating and she began making fuck me noises. I did and I still do. She's fifty five now and is still a beautiful and sexy woman. I'm thirty six and I've never dated or touched another woman after the night I first fucked my mother.

The best part is that the S.O.B. who used to be my dad knows that I'm fucking his ex-wife... my mother. I was surprised when she told him that my cock is three inches longer than his, a lot thicker and that I fuck her a lot longer than he ever did to make sure that she cums before I do. I was nineteen... She was thirty seven. She told him that I'd been fucking her for over two years. She flatly stated that she and her pussy belong to me .... and that NOBODY would ever hit her again. He just looked at us for a few seconds, then turned and walked away.

your story was too draggy and to repetive.

Perhaps I should have noted it as Ball Room Dancing, but the title seemed to fit, of course that is my personal opinion. Heck, it's my keystrokes, so you write your's and I'll write mine. Nice story and worthy of five stars. Any complaints has to be that those writing bad reports needs to stay out of the bathroom. Learn to enjoy nice writing that doesn't only require a half page of oooo's aaaaggggg's.

apart from him being made out to be a total prat....one thing common in your stories is when a woman is climaxing they say...no....no...don't do that...etc etc....I have never ever heard a women say that when having sex with them...never ever.....

I've read this far too many times to count, and each time I enjoy it just as much as the last. The build-up is beautiful, and your pacing allows the reader to anticipate the big moment...which is so full of love--the believable kind. Kudos to you on a masterful job. I'm only sorry I didn't tell you sooner how much I appreciate your work.