All Comments on 'Wandering Ch. 01'

Perfect. Skillfully written. Excellent story line. I can hadly wait for the next episode.

It started out a little sad and bleak and grew into something sweet and full of light and hope, just like the central character. Brilliant.

Speed.

I too found it bleak at the beginning, though that is probably because it had such a reality to it. It moved quickly to his travels and to Constance. The meeting, the interaction and the sex were wonderfully written.

I look forward to the next chapter.

very nice. i remember the empty feeling. you captured that pretty good. and the sex wasnt bad at all.

These are the kind of stories a lot of us come here to read. Not very many these days,so thank you very much. You have talent!

It's stories like this one that brings some of back for more every day. Thanks for sharing your talents with us and I really hope to see more of your work here soon! Thanks again!

wHAT A WONDERUL ROMANTIC STORY. THE ONLY WEAK POINT IS THE TEMPORARY NATURE OF THEIR TIME TOGETHER. THEY SEEMED LIKE A WONDERFUL LOVING COUPLE AND THEN HE JUST DEPARTS. sEEMS KIND OF ANTI CLIMACTIC.i EXPECTED THEM TO BE LIFE LONG LOVERS.

THE cT. yANKEE

Our hero appears to have places to go, and we'll likely hear of his carnal adventures at each stop. I'm looking forward to the next episode. Very well done....** One correction on the geography: Nelson is on Kootenay Lake, and the region is called the East Kootenay, but the mountains are part of the Selkirk Range. It's an incredibly beautiful area, and it beats the hell out of me why I don't live there anymore!

Most start as writers - but no - you had to be an Author of strong projected visions.<P>

They were as onto life should be - the bitter with the sweet and rolling with emotions both subtle and vivid.<P>

Stay awhile so others can see how it is done.<P>

Thanks - With Very High Regard

Just wow. As in Damn impressed. Wonderful warm sexy and a great story. I cannot wait for chapt 2

But in my world it would have ended here.