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by sexichick69
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rsqman69over 15 years agoGreat job for a 1st try
I loved the story. A little short but very hot nonetheless. I'm looking forward to story #2.
AngelliccDesireeeover 15 years agoGood Try
I agree it was a little short but also good for a first time writer.
Nitehawk2Bearover 15 years agoGood one
Definately a nice read for it being your first time. You have to start somewhere and I bet each one you do will only get better. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 15 years agoYou've got promise!
A little short, and needing a few format tweaks, but I hope you continue to write!
Anonymousover 11 years agoFirst effort?
Really, this was your first effort? Nice. Well written, short and sweet. Loved it!
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