All Comments on 'War Prize Ch. 01'

Excellent start! I can't wait to see where you take us in this story. I'm eager to see the evolution of her internal struggle between guilt and pleasure. And I'm dying to find out how the General is connected to Him.

Remarkable, entirely worthy of five stars. I do look forward to seeing more.

Cannot wait. Amazing first Part.

Maybe this should be in BDSM category if she is actually a sub? Unless she kills him in the end :) - I really really hope she does, she needs to kick their ass

This is very well written!! I wish she had a voice that wasn’t internal, but I guess her training as a sub has transferred over? But I still wish she would say something to him haha

.. I found it odd that you gave such lengthy descriptions about the escape and technical aspects of the slavery but only skirted over the sexual interactions. Looking forward to more.

and I’m really looking forward to this match. One of the other comments suggested a preference for either: a). more sex or b). more descriptive sex. I think it’s fine as it’s written because you’ve laid a good foundation while also getting us interested and invested in the characters. This chapter is foreplay ... and we all know how important it is for desire and need to build before we satisfy it.