All Comments on 'Warlock Ch. 10'

This story continues to get better and better. When John finally gets his memory back or some of it, it should be quite interesting. I would think with all the magic and such that restoring a tongue wouldn’t be that huge a problem. I find myself enjoying reading about the basic day to day things they do which some might find trivial or mundane but I find myself interested in it which is a pleasant change of pace. I am always excited when I see a new chapter added and eagerly await more. Thanks again for all you put into your stories since it really shows.

J.D.

This (and it’s predecessor) are good stories, but there are so many sloppy errors of grammar, spelling, word choice, and even gender assignment (Sasha is initially referred to as male, later as female) that it’s distracting.

I agree with most posters on here. This is a great story but the lack of an editor or proof reader severely kills the enjoyment. So many spelling mistakes, grammatical errors, heck in this story either Corsa speaks at the end or John becomes a woman. It's like you are dictating the story and not making sure it is putting in the correct one.