All Comments on 'Warlock Ch. 11'

I love the story. However, having fewer, longer chapters, even it they are spread out more, would make it easier to get into the story and get a flow going for me, as a reader.

Regardless, thank you for your efforts for our enjoyment.

Jim

These chapters are a joy to read. Total immersion into fun and the personalities of each individual mesh very well regardless if it is fighting others or each other like Zynga. You have created some very interesting characters with such varied backgrounds and skills that it makes reading of their travels much more entertaining. Thanks for all that work.

J.D.

Agree with Jim

Longer chapters are much more enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Phineas, you are quite talented. I look forward to you publishing stories outside of this forum, someday.