All Comments on 'Warmer by the Lake Ch. 02'

Great story. I am wondering if Dan gets his cabin finished and who of the three girls get to enjoy it with him. All of them perhaps? Keep up the good work, and try to get the next one out soon please. It seemed like a long gap between part one and two.

More please

I really liked this story. The writing is fantastic and it's not just badly written sex, it has character progression. I'm really liking Prisha as she feels like she's my dream girl. And I'm really interested in the next chapter if Julia is still angered at Daniel. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Such a good story... keep it up looking forward to the next chapter.

I love to go to the primitive camp up on the mountain during the summer months and enjoy nature at its finest. The only difference is we don't have a lake we only have a creek with a deep water hole.

PLEASE - I'd love to read more -

RecHiker

Can't wait for more chapters!!

BUT CAN YOU DO THIIIIS!!!

Well written story. I really enjoy the progression.

It looks like this was happening in real! Well written story dear.

SyleusSnow, This is a great story! I found you through Bumpercars, favorites. Headed over to the next chapter, now, Thanks!

The way the story turned out was unexpected and satisfying.

I like the concept, remote, rustic camp site, casual nudity, sex, etc.

It really annoyed me that the bastard who killed his wife seemed to profit from it after the beatdown.

You should at least edit in a mention of what kind of jail time he got so it feels less unfair and preferably change it so the protagonist didn't outright lose the house he had with his dead wife.

Otherwise,at least for me it overshadows the romance part.

That's an interesting take on it, Anonymous. I don't think Dan in the story feels the same: he nearly killed the guy, deeply regrets it and is happy the cost to him wasn't worse. You're right though... it might help to know whether the drunk driver got another light sentence. Since I'm the author, I can tell you the judge threw the book at him and he got the maximum sentence allowed.