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All Comments on 'Warriors of the Forsaken Ch. 03'

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

Ok, still not bad, but these chapters could stand to be longer.

James_DuncanJames_Duncan4 months ago

If you want to get people interested, you're going to need to make these chapters longer, they aren't even 1 full page on Lit..

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Maybe write more than 2 paragraphs before posting?

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Hi all! I'm Detailed Archery and I'm writing the web novel Warriors of the Forsaken. I have plans for more novels but want to start with this one first. My novels are inspired by anime, hentai, erotic fiction, and movies. My stories contain dark fantasy themes, lots of smut, ...