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All Comments on 'Warriors of the Forsaken Ch. 04'

by DetailedArchery

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Kaleb_BartlettKaleb_Bartlettover 1 year ago

These could deal with quite a bit more length to the story. Feels like I'm just sitting down to read and then it's over.

FrethnorFrethnorabout 1 year ago

I agree with Kaleb_Bartlett. I get that it's easier to write short sections, but it's very annoying to read a story that way.

DetailedArcheryDetailedArcheryabout 1 year agoAuthor

I will increase the length of the chapters going forward.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm glad you've decided to increase the length of your chapters. It's a great start and am looking forward to the next part.

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