- Romance
- Was I Man Enough?
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My son and my daughter, Lucy are sitting beside me and we are all watching the floats on the ends of our fishing lines intently. I can hear Mia singing to herself as she walks down the path to join us arm-in-arm with Aunt Liz who is humming harmony. Mia has that special gleam in her eye, and, wait, I'm seeing something similar about Liz. I have a great life.
The end
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- COMMENTS
Busman196392 months agoA little ‘long in the tooth’ at times but overall it was a great read. This story could be extended in a couple of different ways.
Anonymous2 months agoTerrible story, I’ve read this twice thinking maybe I was wrong the first time. I was not.
Anonymous6 months agoLiz: "Daniel, I made the worse decision of my life. I decided that hurting you was the lessor of two evils. I should have told you what he was doing. I knew you loved me so there was a chance I could make it up to you. I couldn't lose dad, so I just said the first things that came into my mind. Probably because that's what I thought about Gordon every time he touched me. The stupid thing is I know that you and Dave would have stopped him doing anything but I wasn't thinking straight."
====> Liz is quote possibly one of the dumbest LWs (technically almost a fiancee) on this site..That was weak blackmail and could have easily gotten him jail time, if she bothered recording even one encounter. And he was still taping her anyways. And then her response to Daniel when he discovered her. And her subsequently continuing blackmail sex % rape with Gordon AFTER the discovery, all because her after is ill. And she expects twd she coukd mend things with Daniel. Just needed time. No communication. No contrition. Just savage statement and letting others humiliate him, because she continued to cave to Gordon's weaksauce blackmail. Balderdash. Seriously she gets a Darwin award nomination for dumbest girlfriend / fiancee / wife character in an LW story.
Anonymous7 months agoFacts seem far fetched - how is man supposed to trust Mia if her situation is not disclosed up front?
Hblack008 months agoWow, so many negative comments. They were not exclusive, her clients were few and far between and she was in the process of telling him. What did they expect, a thirty year old virgin? As soon as he moved to be exclusive she told him. And the hardest task in the world is to evaluate yourself, so her inability to identify her own issues is understandable and almost expected.
