All Comments on 'Was it a Dream?'

The build up to their meeting was great. The necking and sex was hot.

Thanks Don

Great story. Don't let the negative comments discourage you. Writing can only be improved with more writing. Good luck!

Good stuff, could need a continuation with the other woman, that would be hot. Only negative is that there seems, at times, to be a change in the point of view, like she was narrating, then there would be a sentence like he was contributing something of his point of view -- kinda distracting...