All Comments on 'Was it Fate or Stupidity'

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oldsage_1oldsage_1almost 3 years ago

Good story and thanks for the epilog. I was afraid the ending was going to be left to the reader imagination. Hate those!

Cheers

SAGE

hubby77hubby77almost 3 years ago

Great story. I loved the way you metered out the clues and still threw us for a unexpected loop in the end. I don't know if it was fate or stupidity but it sure as hell was a big dose of carma!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gr8

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Great, great story. Loved every word. AAAAAA++++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked it except that she sold her body for money. Just killed it for me, sorry. That is disgusting.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[01.12.22]

Wonderful!

11/10!!!!!

oldpantythiefoldpantythief8 months ago

I know this if fiction, but the police don't work that way. They don't give out information on active cases and keep things under wraps until they are ready to arrest someone. Anyway, I liked the story for what it was, kind of a ghost and lost love helping a new love. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hauntingly beautiful. (like "Ghost"?)

Two broken halves mending into synergistically into a couple in love with a 'guardian Angel'.

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