All Comments on 'Was It Ravishment or Something Else?'

I really enjoyed this story. "Rape" is really kind of wicked when used correctly....

i thank you for sharing, my wife and i have very close to the same sort of fantasies... very hot read... i may have to go wake her up now... thanks

That was the perfect combination of both.

I'm a fan of reluctance, but the first scene with outright rape just can't get a great score from me. Nice writing, though - and other than the first scene, pretty good.

fantasys right out of "some" lil rotten girl i know heh...ahem i'll have to mention to her to read this one lol...loved it..great fantasy,role playing...with those things a relationship just grows stronger. thank you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

Perfect combination of roughness/non-consentual elements and hot sex. I love how the guy still cared for the girl afterwards, and even goes on to fall in love and get married. Wonderful story! Bravo!

was so good. i love how they ended up getting married, and just everything about it. me and my rabbit like it very much

i just love them. the other commenter says it's rape. what kind of girl cums when she gets raped?!? i don't think so.

You did it right.

The whole story developed very good and held a certain level of realism.

I find that especially hard in this kind of Story.

It was short, but there was everything neede inside.

Really good work.

Thank you.

Good story, a few twists and some love in the mix. Enjoyed it.

Your protagonist is fortunate the event seems to have taken place decades ago. Today, after intimidation and indoctrination from the "No means no!" school of PC philosophy in law enforcement and academic circles, he'd probably end up in court after she confided to a friend what happened.

The problem is that after so many real cases of violent attacks on obviously completely unwilling victims, the default position on all questionable sexual encounters is that it doesn't matter what else is going on, one word is enough to make the other person a probable felon. The horrific accounts from these women, pretty much shut down any intelligent discussion on whether or not a particular case might be different than that.

And this is in spite of the fact that most thinking people realize life, human interaction and seduction are far more complex. These intreractions are usually subject to "negotiations", some of which are non-verbal and which are certainly not put down in a written contract.

All that said, he probably shouldn't have done it, regardless of how her feelings about the incident evolved. That didn't make the story bad, however.

Thanks for writing this great story. tom anon

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