All Comments on 'Was It The "Wrong" Number? Ch. 04'

I'm enjoying this turn of events and the slow mom-son seduction alongnwith the sister mystery. Looking forward to the next chapter.

As has been said the plot is thickening. I too am eager to get stuck into the next bit.

I cant wait for the next part

Wow, great quality and you publish several chapters of different stories a month. I really admire that. I wish every writer was that productive. For some stories I wait for over six months between each release and you publish great episodes on a monthly interval. thumbs up for that! I really want to read on now and I'm not even into mother-son incest so much. :DDD

Bland sex scenes and everything in-between is boring filler.

Read all four chapters, minus the obvious homo parts i was totally into it. Even though chapter 4 was low on the stroke factor, im loving the build up. Cant wait for chapter 5 and more. Chapter 3 page 4 angie going on roleplaying mom angle was perfect!

I was liking it . . . until the end. It just doesn't make sense to me that he would be interested in David for anything other than to please Kami. In fact, he said that himself in chapter 2. Don't build your characters one way and then have them act another.

But with all respect, he’d just been rejected by his mother, his love was out of town and he was horny. Hard dicks make people do irrational things.

I appreciate everyone commenting on this one. This has been a fun story to write. Sorry that not everyone appreciates the different things going here, but when you have herring, some one will want smelt. I would like to apologize to Submission that the main character is finding his way in life and the difficulty of that has allowed him

to contradict himself. Yay, though I walk through the valley of fiction, I will find the commentor that will not allow for such minor variances of character.

i'm anxious to read chapter 5 - and 6,7,8..... The sex scenes with Kami is very erotic. I like the suspense with Mom, and the interplay with Brad and Kami. I'm looking forward to the "meeting" with David -- maybe Angie will apppear as well! Its very well written, and you have really developed real characters and a great storyline. I hope you keep on writing this tale.

Wow great job I can not wait for more!!!!

Great series. Now on to chapter 5

wow... I normally don't like the mother or gay stuff in it, but you make we looking for forward to it... Great writing...