All Comments on 'Watch Yourself Around the Neighbor'

by Madabouthair

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Mom needs Viv and maybe more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great start

So much potential with mom and Viv!

rml65rml65almost 7 years ago
Great story!

Please add more to it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Whew!

A busty innocent teenybopper getting seduced by a hairy muscular butch had my nipples popped from the start. I was once an even more innocent teen that Felicia (not busty tho) who had my first sexual experience at the hands of a woman who seemed a lot like Vivian, so this was a trip down memory lane for me. Five stars only because there's no way to vote 6.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Just Lovely

No one does hairy muscular mature dykes like you do.

Thank you so much for your style.

A sequel staring Vivian and Ms. Cartwright has to be done, I hope.

I know that there's an amazing and hot story between those two to be told.

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingover 6 years ago
More please

Please make these 2 a couple! They are so adorable together

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeservealmost 6 years ago
OMG Why didn't I find this before??

Another good one from you! I agree with dirtyriceking. You should continue this one and make them a couple. Very cool nod to the gym teacher characters. I'd like to see/read your interpretation of one or more of them. Although again...my stories take place LONG before cell phones and common computer use (why I mention hard copy lesson plans and such)

I still can't get enough of the banter between characters. It never gets old for me. I guess that's why your Nurse May story is so awesome. It was the first one of yours I discovered. Also please don't stop the Cara series either!

Thanks for another GREAT read =)

bravebombadierbravebombadieralmost 6 years ago
Brilliant

I've not long been with the site, still finding the authors I like.

Have to say, you're way up there.

Loved it.

When (if) my writing get's as good, I'll be happy.

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