All Comments on 'Watcher Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So few Were wolf stories ever get completed, Hope Your will!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More..... Just more

Faster drops and can you please, lengthen the stories....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Already dreaming of Elizabeth it would appear. If so, she's going to have a big size and coloration change when that mating happens.

He still has to find beta Kila and the actual rogues. She may have been taken as a breeder or entertainment? If she survives he could send her to the pack he decimated. They need strong wolves and will be weak for a long time to come.

If her bow legged adventure produced anything with Watcher she would have to stay silent on the matter. It could get her rejected by a pack or attacked. Alternately, a child of such a pairing would be fought over as either a future threat or a prize to possess and control.

Lots of time to go and gypsy wolf story world history could be revealed in this story. I can't wait to read more, More, MORE. 🤓😁

sweetone66sweetone66over 3 years ago

Too bad Watcher wasn't wiser, he might have realized his error before he slaughtered so many innocents. Too much for me... I can stand the bloodshed if it's that of the guilty, but not that of innocents!!! Please no more screw ups from one who is supposed to be so great. The GOT seems to have inspired far too many writers... so sad!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Oof, right in the feels!

Your writing is splendid and I can really see the sort of ancient aloofness in Watcher. I like that you didn’t make it translate into perfect wisdom - it makes him a rich character.

Really love this story! I wish it could be a whole novel.

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 3 years ago
Enjoying this but

hope you update the other too.

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So I came to discover that I incorrectly posted only the second half of Watcher Ch. 3. The correct document has been submitted at this time.

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