All Comments on 'Watchin' You'

Good story!

5

What happened to Cindy was horrific. I wish you'd added an epilogue where the animals that raped her were caught, then brutalised in prison.

But the ending seemed a bit too rushed. Their getting back together was too quick. And why did he suddenly have a ring to give to her?

Five Stars!

Have become one of the better writers on here. Good work. Great story.5

Story it was a complete success. Just like something StangStar06 would write.

Someone's in a hurry, hmm?" I said with a giggle. Men don't giggle , otherwise a lovely romance

Lovely story

Loved that story. Please continue to create such wonderful images~

Three days after their row about Vegas ,they make up get real.He would have had to grovel for weeks for her even to talk to him

Mush absolute mush but bloody good mush, this old cynic loved it.

I like most of your stories but you rushed to fast to the end. You start good, jump to the middle for a short interlude then straight to the end. Need to put more substance in between for a great story.

Very sweet story!

Read a couple of your other stories and OK good enough to keep me hanging around but this one hooked me! Great story. violence, heartbreak, romance, a little sex and promise for a future. Kind of touched all the right nerve endings. Looking forward to the next episode.

5 stars

Cheers

SAGE

USMC make them pay and if they win take as many with you as you can.

Selfish. I mourned but for myself for losing someone

If good person better off now I am one missing them.

jtwheels

Very nice read! Thank-you

Third read. I wish I could give it another 5 stars.

One my my most favorite stories!

Very nice story, had the rears welling up at the end.

Jim is an idiot. He is in a long term relationship which includes a child and decides to go on a trip to Las Vegas by himself? Myra should have left him at that time. Jim is useless as a husband/father!

Us men r kinda slow some times.

Literally one of the best stories I have ever read on here. Just great.

I dunno that Jim is all that as a candidate for marriage. His wife has been brutally raped but appears to be improving with treatment. She learns she's pregnant, however, and then regresses while refusing ongoing treatment. What did he think was going to happen if he kept leaving her home alone? Sorry, but his love for her was lacking while she was still alive.

I feel that he was an idiot for taking taking Myra and Sara with him on holiday! That proved to me that he didn’t love Myra or Sara!

This really didn't work. The score is from the heart strings pulled not the quality of work. That relationship was forced in every way possible and did not even remotely grow as a normal relationship would. The husband was traumatized and the last thing he needed was an aggressive woman forcing him in a direction that he didn't chose. By the end he was behaving desperately which indicative of codependency.

This is not a healthy relationship by any means. You should not write about subjects you do not understand. The wife would have been given plan B at the emergency room. Her getting pregnant after that, the surgeries and the stress is extremely remote. If the wife was that traumatized her therapist would have moved her into a facility fearing self harm. This is all very wrong. -starsong

Talk about moving fast... He needs more time in therapy and a longer period of learning to live and move on from his dead wife. Story was good in the beginning, but the ending just felt rushed.

Lovely story. Sometimes it takes an external event to cause us to move on.

This guy is dumber than rocks. He wants to go on a vacation alone to Vegas! When he went to Vegas in the past he had Cindy with him. Why would he think it would be a great vacation to go alone? He would just get depressed since Cindy wasn’t there and he would probably fall off his hotel balcony.

I'm glad the therapist was able to get him to move on! 5 BIG FLUFFY STARS!

I enjoyed this story very much. There wasn’t much depth to the characters but it was a heartwarming read.

An excellent story in many ways. No artificial happenings to stretch beliefs and realistic actions of the characters. I felt like I grew to know these people. Rey well done. Deserving of an 8 star rating.

Bill S.

Great story 5 stars

Your stories are fantastic.

He just should have given his wife's clothes to a woman's shelter or Goodwill it would have honored his wife and still gave him closure.

Really good story. Heart warming ending!