All Comments on 'Watching Chrissy'

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goodlorigoodloriover 12 years ago
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Please continue

toni49toni49over 12 years ago
nice

real good story and sure want to hear more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Start

This is a great story with great build up, but the last 2 or 3 paragraphs felt like they were rushing the action and weren't consistent with the pace of the rest of the story. Please consider rewriting the last 2 or 3 paragraphs with same attention to detail you in the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please write a second chapter!

Please write a second chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More please

I liked the start, would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh God

That is just the way the girls thought of me in school jack off for me but don't expect me to touch you or don't expect me to show you my vagina. I just want to see your pathetic little dick and cum. Pleaseeeeeeee do it or take me home now.

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