All Comments on 'Watching Her Is My Fantasy Ch. 02'

Excellent! Nice story with a different plot twist. Very well written, with good syntax, grammar, punctuation and editing. Good job well done!

wannabe cucks will read, spank, then leave a negative comment in self-loathing - thanks for giving them jerk material, they love the idea of getting cucked - they just hate themselves for it so they assuage their latent guilt by posting a negative comment

except for wbc, fuck them, all the literary experts read and comment, but do not contribute. i liked the way this was going, it is short . . . . but i look forward to the rest. thanks for having the balls to write a story and submit it to the loathing lurkers that wish they had a life!!

it's funny how all these anon's talking about having balls but don't have an account to speak of ....lol and they call others WBC, nothing I like, but writting style is good and husband was involved.....3 stars

Kind of short, but we all have other things to do. Not a theme I particularly enjoy or identify with, but you build tension well and know k\how to build a scene.

Longer would be nice. Don't let nay sayers get you down. Has a lot of promise.

And I liked it! :P

Are you,really? Show me!

Highly Recommend!

His wife likes men's attention, she enjoys to be in company of men, she likes to be touched, groped & caressed by men... BUT being a true Loving Wife she doesn't wanna lose her husband over a case of "innocent groping" (actually we are talking "GROPING+++").

Luckily for her, & for him, she is married to an understanding & forgiving Loving Husband who will give her ample leeway to find and realize her true self.

(Hope the last sentence make sense.)