All Comments on 'Watching Him Back'

it!!!!! great beginning and can see that it will make good process

I love them both. Can't wait til Friday! Hickeys galore.

This is going to be GREAT! Please hurry with Chapter 2!

Great characters - they are both very appealing... They both have some attitude and I'm really looking forward to what happens to them next coming from different ends of the spectrum - Crispin clearly out, but 'sort of' submissive (cos I think he might not be totally) and 'I' very definitely closeted, but pretty dominant!

gimme more :)

so happy to see you and your story here!! loved it

I love the plot. I love the characters. Can't wait for more!

These two are great characters, I can't wait to see how you develop them and their relationship. Aaron abandoning caution and Crispin's spirit promises a hot...complicated tale. Great first chapter and submission.

Peace and joy,

Shell

I hope there's a sequel.

More Please!

You have it in Spades my dear. Wonderful story, let us know when the next installment will come out.

An incredibly well-written teen jock/nerd story. I was the jock in high school and I had a bit of a crush on a "nerd." I sincerely hope you continue this. I would like to see a blow job scene before the main fuck scene though; but hey, it's your story and it is good.

Super cute and sexy. Can't wait for more...

Xoxo

Night

I love the POV of the jock this time :) call me cynical, but its refreshing, not that I don't love it the other way around too. I really liked this and I hope you'll keep writing; these characters are hot, though I kind of agree with Aaron's comments on Crispin's wardrobe :) not a big fan of the diaper pants, they just look like—never mind, I'm not even going there!

Writing in 1st person is hard to do and you managed to pull it off. Look forward to reading more of you work.

Wow. This is so cute! You are so great at setting the ground. Please have the next chapter soon.

I'm totally in love! Want. More. You're a fantastic writer, your characters are believable and adorable, I want more! <3

You’re a very good writer. Don’t let it go. The situations flow beautifully from beat to beat; the characters are believable and, dare I say this, adorable; and your literary voice is cool and transparent. As with other readers who’ve commented I look forward to more.

I love the hickey marking...

Very teenager and funny. Which is what it is supposed to be, looking back from my age at teenagers in lust. Good job!

haha i love the way you write, you had me smiling all the way through this.!!!