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Click here"Ow, ow, ow, okay," Crispin's muffled voice protests. He pushes me off of his chest and raises his arm to look down at the bright reddish purple circle. "Damn, I think you got the muscle."
I dip my finger into his navel, amused at how quickly he shivers and knocks my hand away. "A little something to remember me by."
"That's just mean. You don't have one."
I step back so he can see me adjusting my half-hard cock in my jeans. "You can make up for it later."
Pulling his shirt down, Crispin glares at me. "It's not a favor, jerk. It's a fucking Property Of stamp."
Damn straight. I love how he can't quite figure out how to act. He glances at me and drops his head, gets down from the cabinets and starts walking towards me, changes his mind and goes to the projector, then looks back at me again. Knowing that I can have that kind of effect on someone I like is a powerful aphrodisiac. Had Crispin any less control, had he hesitated one second longer, I would have pulled him back and play out one of those fantasies. As it is he tucks his t-shirt back into his shorts, mumbles, "Er, Friday it is there, buddy," and opens the door.
"I'm watching your ass," I say in response as he wheels the projector out of the room. Crispin acknowledges that by doing a ridiculous booty bounce while whistling "Single Ladies," and I start laughing again. Three days is a long time until Friday.
haha i love the way you write, you had me smiling all the way through this.!!!
Very teenager and funny. Which is what it is supposed to be, looking back from my age at teenagers in lust. Good job!
You’re a very good writer. Don’t let it go. The situations flow beautifully from beat to beat; the characters are believable and, dare I say this, adorable; and your literary voice is cool and transparent. As with other readers who’ve commented I look forward to more.
I'm totally in love! Want. More. You're a fantastic writer, your characters are believable and adorable, I want more! <3
Wow. This is so cute! You are so great at setting the ground. Please have the next chapter soon.
Writing in 1st person is hard to do and you managed to pull it off. Look forward to reading more of you work.
I love the POV of the jock this time :) call me cynical, but its refreshing, not that I don't love it the other way around too. I really liked this and I hope you'll keep writing; these characters are hot, though I kind of agree with Aaron's comments on Crispin's wardrobe :) not a big fan of the diaper pants, they just look like—never mind, I'm not even going there!
An incredibly well-written teen jock/nerd story. I was the jock in high school and I had a bit of a crush on a "nerd." I sincerely hope you continue this. I would like to see a blow job scene before the main fuck scene though; but hey, it's your story and it is good.