All Comments on 'Watching Jessie'

This could have been pretty hot but needed more. Longer description of the sex. More protesting. More explanation. If this was a reluctance situation more seduction talk and reluctance talk.

To be answered is, why are you still calling her your girlfriend? She would be any other boyfriend's ex.

1*-girlfriend? You do know this is loving wives?

What a crock of crap. No place to vote a 0ne star.

GUY IS GETTING READY TO FUCK HIS GIRLFRIEND-HE STANDS THERE AND WATCHES? FUCK THIS WIMP, COWARD.

Waste of time reading this as it makes no sense.

I liked it. Nice length, good elements. Thanks for the effort

This story has potential, but in its current form, it has problems. Who is Jake? Did Amy and Sarah intend on getting Jessie fucked by Jake? Do they not like Jessie's boyfriend? Was Jessie reluctant from the very beginning? If not, why not? How did she and Jake get from where she started losing clothes to the hood of the car?

It may be more work than the author wants to do, but it would be nice to see this story re-written in a more developed way.

"My girlfriend Jessie.....". WRONG category right from the start. I simply don't understand how you ended up in the loving wives category with a girlfriend? If you can't get that part right, how did you think the rest of the story would go? Downhill.

1 star

1*

By her saying she was being raped and he just watched...Why? Simple: "We had been dating for six months where this story begins", and being so his feelings for her were null...And all characters in it seem stupid, the rapist the bigger of them all! He risked go to jail and be all his life paying child support...1*

I see that loser Impo-64 is back to his old tricks of posting many negative comments. It rakes a special kind of asshole to do that when you can't even write anything better. Total dick move.

What a totally stupid story

Only mentally sick people would like it! A woman being treated worst than an animal and still they liked it?

No more wimpy cucks please. Go suck a real dick and get it over with for Christ sakes.

This story touches on the theme of a sexually self-suppressing female that obviously has normal sexual desires. The boy friend watching touches on the natural male desire to fuck and to watch women fuck. Society tries to encourage women to self-suppress their sexual desires. Society tries to shame men for enjoying the thrill of watching a wife or girlfriend fuck. Imagine how much fun we could all be having if people stopped the unnatural taboos about sexual pleasure. This story seems to be the introductory moment in the life of the male and female where they discover something about themselves and their sexual needs and desires. In real life a moment like this could be the beginning of a wonderful sexual adventure for the couple. Or, if the girl finds out she is now PG or has a STD it would be the beginning of discovering that unprotected sex with strangers is foolish. Perhaps they would discover that It is much better to plan a life that includes safe sexual pleasure rather then go through life pent-up and then to give-in to a needlessly suppressed desire under dangerous circumstances.

she had more pricks than a porcupine and he loved watching and cleaning her.

Not the trash the haters are calling it, but YOU need to fill in the blanks if you want it to be a good story, What will the consequences be for their relationship? Will there be consequences for the third party asshole?

Thanks a keep on going!

Nice story!! Please keep up the good work!

(Just ignore the stupid trolls!)

Take some time and flesh out your characters. Get a plot. Only you know where the story goes. Don't let anyone else guide your plot. If they want a story with the plot they're giving you, let them sit down and write the damn thing.

TURN ON VOTING! Take your lumps like the rest of us!

Worthless and uninteresting if you intended this to be a story. NO Loving wives present, only cheap skanks and sluts. Not good! 1* for pity!

Nice story but needs a bit more detail on why everything is happening and what everyone's motivation was in this maybe you could write another chapter up but this time from the POV of the girls

Second part is posted under exhibitionists and voyers

Po story

What a stupid story..this dumb ass boyfriend should have never left his gf alone...but when he found her...he did nothing...what a dumb ass...if he lived her he would have stepped in to protect her

The most stupid dumb story on this entire site