All Comments on 'Watching the Midnight Romp'

for a newbie, well done and keep writing please.

VERY NICE SHAME SHE DIDN'T DIDNT NOTICE YOU

You should feel very special... This was the first lesbian story i read and... yeah... had me hooked... i wouldn't mind a second visit from your roommates mysterious female lover where they do notice you... well done!

I think I have to agree with the others, please continue the tale. You have piqued my curiosity too! Celly

. . . deliciously described! There HAS to be more to the story.

Usually, I don't like shorts stories because most are rushed.

This story although short feels complete.

In a few paragraphs you managed to capture the essence of eroticism.

Well Done.