All Comments on 'Waves of Time Ch. 02'

by marybethf

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Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

DiJiTDiJiTover 17 years ago
Wonderful

You never cease to amaze me with your writing. You have such a flare for the written word. Your characters are so real that you can't help but get caught up in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great stuff

Creative writing that is

Right where it needs to be!

I enjoyed this story so much---the characters are

People that I would meet,

People I would entertain, and

Love to get to know both physically and

Emotionally

Eileen

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
I loved the ending...

and the beginnning and the middle... Wonderful story, Beth. You are at the top of your form, as usual. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another Awesome Tale

This story was exquisite - painful, fun, loving, sorrowful, and rewarding. Your characters are well developed and truly come to life for the reader. Great writing.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

True love meets a soul and if so, the shell the outside is just add on, the soul is the light we see we feel we are sucked into ...... Soooooo lovely soooooo wonderful

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