All Comments on 'We Did a Good Thing Ch. 01'

Major cliffhanger!

5

Liked how this story ties in with the others and we get to see Brenda and Todd again. Thought things were going along great until the very last part. Cliff hanger is right. We were cruising right along and then WHAM! I can't even guess what's going on with the story and where it's headed to. Guess we'll all just have to wait and see what happens when chapter 02 comes out. Thanks

Not the chapter ending I expected or enjoy

Hindsight2020: Yours is (was) only the second non-anonymous comment we've deleted.

Since you've disabled the ability to receive private feedback in your profile, we couldn't contact you directly to get more information about your odd complaint. Since you've not submitted any works yourself (at least under that name) you might not know that the reason we don't do what you demand is because the Literotica rules forbid it. The fact that you 1*'d this submission for not breaking a rule is strangely funny to us.

We' also read enough of your other feedback on other stories to determine your comments are pretty much worthless across the board. Sorry not sorry.

... but what an ending. Haven't read all the stories before but managed to keep up and found it to be your usual high standard. Not sure where it's going but that ending makes one wonder.

Had things to do but now I'll be reading part 2.

5 stars

Grammar still needs working on.

Should be integrated into the the flight before Christmas story, then the stories would flow nicely together.

WTF?