All Comments on 'We Did a Good Thing Ch. 02'

Maybe it should be, We did a great thing!

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Great story!! Thank you very much.

Okay, the short wait was worth it. The ending of the last chapter was kind of a gut punch that left me wondering what in heck was going on. Glad to find out all is well with the Carlson household and bigger things are in store. Well done, thanks again.

Always a pleasure to read one of your stories. Excellent as per usual.

Great two chapters. If I was forced to complain, the second chapter felt a bit choppy, but who am I to complain! :)

I have enjoyed the whole interconnected set of stories. Great characters and the buildup is awesome.

Well written and connected story (stories).

The characters and stories you two publish are just fun. Thanks DP

one of the best multi-story I have read. Everyone had that something of a connection that kept propelling the reader to keep reading. Enjoyable from beginning to end !!

I felt cheated at the end of the previous chapter by that cliffhanger. I felt so invested in that relationship. I hope you won’t feel the need to do that again! With that said, I loved the story(s.) I especially enjoy the rich details of the aviation and the sod farm. Realistic settings and technical details make me feel that I’m glimpsing another life that I otherwise wouldn’t know. That makes the story so much more enjoyable for me. 5* of course.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

Maybe not quite as exciting as some of the longer ones but nevertheless a good yarn and I'm pleased to see them progress their relationship and Brenda's surprise.

5 stars.

Pass the sick bucket.

I found the passage where they went on holiday very triggering. They got into the hotel room, left the door ajar to hear frogs and ocean, snuggled up in bed, and the aircon kept them cool. NO NO NO. In the tropics, you should never ever leave the door open and the aircon on. Apart from being a terrible waste of power, that aircon is going to be working its guts off trying to cool down the humid air coming through the door, and producing a steady stream of moisture as it does it. Either leave the door open and turn on the ceiling fan, or close the door and put on the aircon. You should only retain that paragraph if you include a telling-off from the staff the next morning...

I liked it but I still think it should be integrated in the the first story The Flight before Christmas.

I'm glad you're a current contributor here. I'll be watching for your new stories.

Loved it

Read the whole series and enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks.

You are an excellent writer. You develop characters the reader truly cares about.

Loved it! You guys do great work!!

Loved all three of this series. Keep up the good works. MtM

Three great stories, thank you.