All Comments on 'We Didn't Know'

Great start, can’t wait to read more.

There's a potential, I like the possibilities, hope it will live up to them.

Feels like I'm reading a shoujo manga or something.

Some intersting developments are on the way...

Loved it. Can't wait for more

Great start. Very compelling and good use of plot hooks.

Keen to read more.

5 stars!

Beautiful story with immense potential courtesy the amazing characterisation and that excellent cliff-hanger ending. Can't wait to read how the story unfolds now!

An additional point, would've loved if this was written in first person, though third person works mighty fine as well.

Uh this isn't incest/tabboo. Wrong genre mate

Enjoyed the story. Can't wait for the next part.

where is the rest of the story! I will rate it when I read the end of it. So far a 5.

So far seems good.

Learn to just write in third person, with thought quotes if necessary. The constant POV changes just ruin any potential immersion.

Oh &^#^^&*&!!!

We need more! 5/5

Wanting more, without any doubt.

That was a good start. Ready for more!!

Thanks for the love. Can't wait for the rest!

Good read for your first story, please keep going. I agree about the POV it can be quite annoying

Nice cliffhanger, I was really getting into the story, Great work by all of you

That was just plain painful to try to read.

You need to keep going with this story. It’s great so far.

We need More.

Good so far... can't wait for part 2!!

I'm just curious about what kind of author this one will be: one of those who post installments frequently or one of those who makes the readers wait for a long time to post new installments? Unfortunately, most authors belong to the second group. Will we be fortunate and will this author belong to the first group?

i loved your story, guys. can't wait to get more 😘

Dating your best friend is not even slightly taboo....I'd call it normal. Writing and formatting need a little work, but the story itself was good.

Know where this is headed, but a fresh take and well written story development. 5*

The bold letters is definitely not needed. While possibly a personal reaction it was incredibly distracting.