by magmaman
You captured and held my attention from the very beginning. A great story very well executed. Thank you sir, for the entertainment.
Well written story with a good plot line. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
I enjoyed Tamara's strength and her sweet nature. Poor Oliver, realizing how much he'd hurt Kathy. It was nice that he was able to grow from the experience with her. I like hearing "how we met" stories from my friends too.
a story where the guy learns his lesson and the girl does not just fall at his feet, great
Dag-nabit, I knew I shoulda learned how to read! lol Sweet story, well written and all came out great. A rather surprise ending capped it off.
and a very nice depiction of the evolution of personalities... Have they figured out when enough will be enough? Also Kathy's tendencies to make all sorts of assumptions without verbal exchanges is fascinating....
MGM always gives us value for our and his time.
..and all the better for it.
A love story with reality AND a deserved happy ending.
Thank you.
A nice guy who's not a sexual pig and a shy girl who's a virgin (a little unbelievable at 27) - a very nice story - - great character development although I would have liked to read her emotions and desires from the start of their friendship as well.
I really enjoyed this story - definitely 5 stars.
...you do well with characters who are flawed but not overly so. Couldn't figure out how old the characters were now.
lovable characters for a splendid story. Thanks for sharing with us your fantasy.
one of the best love stories i ever read... simple yet full of love... keep it up!
I really liked the story and the characters. I really liked the mysterious Tamara. I wish her character had been developed a little more.
Great ending - I was soooo worried it would take a nasty turn - but you let it roll to the perfect ending -
Really well done, enough hanging questions throughout to keep me engaged - thanks -
a great story of love...so glad they found each other in the end...just how it should be and well on their way to having a large family...I love stories like this with happy endings...so much better than reading about fuck slut whores spreading it about.....
Another of your great stories. I have read many am looking forward to reading the rest.