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by Sir_Erotica

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too Much Time on Nothing

Great content early in the story. When it devolves into a bad Deliverance parody, though, it loses all its erotic power and focus. I knew where it was going from the beginning of that portion, and there's no need to linger so long and cheat the reader of what should be the climax--the sex.

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