All Comments on 'We Need to Study Our Math'

Nice! Very good, barely credible but good nevertheless.

What started as an enticing story ended up pissing me off. Not a good way to end a story. I don’t want to even follow the story from here.

Good to see you writing again. Look forward to future chapters

Way too short, sex almost out of the blue, change in clothing, weird cutoff.

Readers don't like story's in sort bit no fun to read

Little too “elegant” on the narrative and missing any mention of sexual tension previously - 4*

Haven't finished the story, yet - but, LOVED this enough to comment favorably on it...

And then, for sure, the fecal matter would experience a collision with the rotating air circulation device. And, in consequence, we would find ourselves in the headwaters of the proverbial polluted tributary, lacking the proper means of propulsion.

I'll bet, you don't 'row, row, row your boat' either ... I bet you 'propel, propel, propel your craft, placidly down the solution... '

Hot start!

Cheap shot shutting the story off incomplete. Maybe you can find a good proofreader as you need one.

Pls finish the story!

While I like the idea (twin brother and sister studying together under pressure), the story progresses too rapidly: readers could understand coupling like this after several other events happened first (assume she's VERY frustrated about Gene and spends a chapter going over that, with him expressing his similar frustration over not getting laid [your words] and yet she tries to boob poking and hand-on-thigh gesture to gauge his interest; she notes he doesn't object; readers notice sexual tension, but they finish their problems and we all move on on to the next chapter. Perhaps next is another fevered-but-hidden study session to iron out a few more procedural things they missed, but THIS time, he spots something she missed; perhaps he tries some "innocent" groping while going for some more cocoa, but NOW this behavior plants the idea in her head she IS desirable and wanted..even if that's her brother...AND it turns her on. However, they both partly dismiss it but keep it on the backburner. Maybe ch 3 is about them doing a shorter study session, they have success, but they BOTH decide to kiss each other at the same time after a celebratory hug, yet the experience melts them both and leaves them wanting more. Then they address their doubts, leading to her SLOWLY shedding some of her clothing...not like a striptease, but maybe in a way like "is this ok?" Then it gets SERIOUS where it makes her shed all inhibitions and adiós clothing like "oh hell...why not?!??" From that point, we get to him leaning her against the table and she's accepted he does desire her that way and he does consummate his desire with her. That progression would feel more built-up and not so forced. 3