by Georgiaray
Not bad, but not great. If this is some kind of "confession", then i guess it was good for your soul. If this is your first story, you had a better start than most on here. Problem is that your story was not that exciting. Sorry, but honest opinion.
This might be the dumbest story I've read on here, and that is saying something.
Where in the story does it say he ejaculated before his erection shrank and slip out of her pussy?
she was rapidly approaching 50 yrs. . though when she did turn 18 his world
completely changed . though her breasts became nice fat after pregnancy . though he's
still good reasonable age [ isn't mentioned ] able fucking her perfectly ........
MAKEUP MIND HER AGE . MAKEUP MIND HIS AGE . MAKEUP MIND ABOUT CHILDREN
This was interesting. It was almost an idiosyncratic style of writing, but yet not. I liked the language, harsh but seemingly honest. I think it’s a good piece, something there maybe.