by CalMaple
Wow! That was really good. Loved the build up, good length so it didn't wear off its welcome, and I loved the focus on his penis and ass! Could've done with a bit more detail, and DEFINITELY more description, though. After all, those are the things that truly draw us into erotica, especially exhibitionism-based erotica. Since a big part of the arousal is the sensations and feelings the exposed person has, that's vital. Describing them is also vital, since if the purpose is a fetish based in nudity, well it's a pretty big problem if we don't know what they look like (clothed or naked).
That was amazing. I really hope you continue it. Might be my favorite story on here