All Comments on 'Web of Pleasure'

Loved your story!

Love good Mamono stories. Like Perentie! Great where is a bit of fear, romance between human and dominant mamono, and no killing or rape and the like, like so many others. 5 Stars!

I like this story a lot. AAAAAA++++++

Can't wait to see this story continue! What else does she have planned!?

[14.08.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

One niggle though, you mention that he's in the Nevada desert (and mentioned Elko and Reno) but you misplaced my home state to the 'Midwest' when it's actually in the 'South West'.

But this redeems you a bit:

"I mean not just you personally but other Ma... Manamana?"

She gently corrected him. "Mamono."

11/10!!!!!

'Sin City' Spence?:>}

If your protagonist got back into "the World",and said that he saw a giant spider, people would think that he was either on drugs, booze, mentally ill. What would you think if someone told you that he had seen a creature that was half spider, half human? Nice job on this story. Might I suggest that, since he is in Nevada, you could throw in a story/ sub-story that he also got involved with aliens on land that is covered by AREA-51? That area has SEVERAL ACRES of land that got impounded when the TOP SECRET base was created. Again, nice job on this story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

While he slept, she invenomated him to keep him in stasis, wrapped him in a cocoon and awaited the arrival of her young from her recently fertilized eggs.

Because that's what spiders do.

JK, good read.