All Comments on 'Wedding Day Cuckold'

This was a very good story. Only a cuck could truly understand how hot this is. Thanks for writing and please keep them cumming!!!

"After the reception, you'll have to find somewhere to wait. They are going to come to our room and fuck me again. One of them is going to take my virgin ass."

Somewhere to wait? No, he should join in and she should be airtight. :)

This isn't a husband, this is a spectator. He should dance with his wife, he should go down on his wife, he should bring his wife to multiple orgasms. That's the husband's job. What you're describing is not a solid underlying primary relationship with one or two outside partners added once in a while as spice or amusement, it's a non-extant primary relationship with the outside partners used as a crutch because hubby is merely watching instead of actively participating. Remove Don and James and what's left isn't a marriage between Bob and the narrator - what's left is a hollow shell as the primary relationship in many key aspects never existed at all.

Dance with the others, sure, but save the last dance for me. There's a time and a place for being a wallflower - but turning down your own wife's request for a dance isn't it. She needs one more lover. That lover should be her husband. His absence in all but name makes this incomplete. She needs to draw him out of his shell now.

Otherwise, this ends up a bit like the foot fetishist who spends so much time kissing his partner's feet that he completely ignores the rest of her. That gets frustrating.

Wow! This is one of the best cuck stories ever! :D My boyfriend and I love it! We like stories where the male encourages his female to cheat. As for this one, we especially love the wedding theme. This story got us both so hot we have made out to it like 20 times so far! More more! Please! Take us on their honeymoon and let us watch him watch her MORE! :D

I'm so against her and his actions, I ended up skimming quite a bit and I know I'd rate you for the content, not quality...

I was seriously hoping when I reached the end, I'd find out it wasn't true... ah well, love and learn.

Given how the story developed, it was a foregone conclusion that Bob would settle for being a cuckold forever.

If I'd been handed a note like that in that situation I'd have said "I don't" and walked away. I might have tried to kill the guys involved, but probably not. But then, I'd have dumped the slut long before any wedding plans. It's Bob's loss that he went through with it.

@Imstillfun I appreciate the unbiased comments. Like I said in my first comment this is my favorite new cuckold story. Thank you.

As a writer we see our score, all comments, and everyone who favorited our stories or us as writers. We also see how many times it was read and how many people voted. We also get email feedback if we want. We get enough positive feedback that the score and comments are not as important.

I don't care if everyone likes my stories. I do care that someone did.

I never rate stories. I probably should, but I have heard from other people in LW who don't rate stories either. From what I see people go through and rate all cuckold stories 1 star without even reading them.

Look through the oldest stories posted in LW. They are almost all cuckold stories. It's a known fact this hub was created for cuckold stories. There was almost a ban on all stories that are not cuckold stories. I don't know what type of erotic stories people expect to find in LW, but I do know the hub was created for cuckold/cheating wife stories. It's in the description.

When you have people giving one star without reading and others giving 5 stars to cancel the one-bombers, it is clear there is no relationship between the value of a Loving Wives story and the score it gets.

However, I think it is essential that authors leave the scoring system open, in the same way that I believe it is unfair to delete stupid and unfavourable comments. They provide therapy for those who need to make a statement.

And the comments provide entertainment for those who like to feel superior to those who display their silliness by upsetting themselves over fantasy stories. One way or another, we all have our needs.

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You are correct to a certain extent about scores rising a bit after the loonies have their rant.but.... All.stories tend to rise a bit after awhile including BTB , Stangstars and others. I still.believe all in all that cuck still does not rate as high.But who cares.it's a free porn website not voting on the Nobel Prize.What I don't understand is the overwhelming amount of these type stories Percentage wise.it's insane .There cannot be that many men in real life that want there spouse or girlfriend to treat them like something on the bottom of their shoe.Listen I have no problem with sharing when it's done with respect and both partners are having fun but the idea that someone you love gets off humiliating the crap out of someone they are supposed to love.Well sorry but not only does it suck but it tends to be the antithesis of erotic.Unless of course your a fetishist. ........

@ Imstillfun My votes the literotica deleted. The Literotica delets a lot of anticuck 1* vots at the cuck stories and my 5***** at non cuck stories. So it is easy!

The Literotica delets a lot of protest votes!

If you look at the LW category. Then then tags and pick cuckold.

You find new stories initially get low scores. As they get older their scores go up. Most older stories have the same scores as other categories.

It would seem there is a group of people adamantly against these stories, but once they jump in and condem them. Most others like them. :).

You are correct That there are alot of cuckold stories in LW anymore but you are wrong in that it was always been that way Take.a look at the bottom of the Loving Wives page at the highest rated LW's stories ever posted.Not ONE is a cuck.story Got it? Listen if you like slurping someone elses.slop out of your girl good for you.Most of the readership here does not have YOUR fetish. Your know something else? This was this authors lowest the rated story she has ever posted .What does that say rocket boy.Listen You have a right to your opinion as do tell rest of us.Chill out.

@ annabully What would you do with the more thousands non cuck stories in LW?

The 1* votes is a Civil Movement for an independent Marriage Strife hub.

Nowdays you find non cuck stories here almost always.............You would be happy too a pure independent cuck and wife sharing hub and we would be happy for an independent Marriage Strife hub too. Why does not struggle together cuck story fans and Consequence story hub fans for two independent hubs. The owner of the Literotica decided the two sort of stories as the Wife sharing-cuck stories and the Consequence stories must be together in LW last year.

You do realize that this category has always been dominated by cuckold stories, right? And that it was literally created to house cheating wife/cuckold stories? Really if you don't like those stories, just don't even open LW stories. Who the fuck are any of you to call cuckolds the lowest form of existence or whatever else you say? My girlfriend fucks other guys all the time, which is actually real. She still loves me, and we are perfect together. Been in cuckold relationship for over 3 years. I am not a wimp, actually just the opposite. I have a reputation as a dude you don't want to fuck with, for good reason. Most of my friends know about my relationship with my girl, a few of them regularly fuck her. They all still respect me, and treat me like a man. Just because I get off on different shit than you doens't make me some pathetic wimp. If no one is hurt, and no children are involved, I could give a fuck less what people are into. I don't judge a person by their sexual fantasies. Give it a break and stop leaving your ignorant worthless comments on good stories.

You ought to know Namsbitch. You and vastiesmith2(alias bonnietaylor2) are a prime example of this. Do you ever read bonnie's comments? Only an idiot would write words like that day after day. I rest my case. No comment on story, don't read cuckold themed trash. Too low for me. I can see now why most of the good erotic writers left this site, too many cuckold lovers dominating this category, the lowest form of animal on earth.

No. not in real men's hearts. Only in the hearts of the poor insecure mental weaklings who believe that violence is a lesser crime than a wife's adultery. They don't have the self-awareness to wonder why they might be reacting in the way they do. And they don't have the empathy to enquire as to the reasons why the woman may have acted as she did.

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grooming to be a cuck/ TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm OK with that.

I am amazed at the violence in men's hearts. You'd really beat a woman who cheated on you?

You did a great job of writing a believable and exciting story. I think it speaks to your abilities as an author that many of the idiots who commented think this is reality.

For those of you who want to know who these people are, alert the media that you are outing Dick and Jane Doe, 10 Main Street, Anytown, USA as a cuckold couple.

Afterwards, look up the definition of fiction in the dictionary, dumbasses.

There are 10000 similar cuck stories here so we do not make big mistake to give 1* vithout reading. Only the anon comments help us and bonny and friends too........

We all love how it pisses off the asshole of Lit, dear annony!!! Keep writing maybe annony will have a stroke.

Sorry. I crack me up.

Fetishes cuckold,femdom sph.Figures a story like this would appeal to you Congrats.Believe it or not other people have just aas much right to comment as you So.... You know the problem with this story and I'm not necessarily a cuckold story hater but it has to have a touch of reality to it or it becomes a caricature of itself.Even for fantasy /fictiont it goes to far beyond the realm of reality.It becomes almost to stupid to read.Anyways anabully lighten up dude.We get it your a cuck lover

It would be an interesting world, if the names, adresses of the cuckold married pairs we read on a website and the cucks and the hot wives had to name themselves to a community of a town, job, family, neighbores. The homosexuals began to name themselves, so cuckolds and hotwives now you should start.

Everyone who said they would beat her.... That is fucked up. If a man wants his wife to fuck other men, who cares? There's a lot worse fantasies to have. Like beating women who cheat. You seriously get off on the thought of beating a woman, and somehow cuckold men are fucked up??

In my opinion it's a 5 star story. But if you think cuckold stories are so bad why are you reading a story clearly labeled "Wedding Day Cuckold"? Or any sorry in LW hub? If you like this type of story, but thought this one was bad, then explain why you didn't like it. If you don't like the theme, then just don't fucking read them and don't fucking comment on them.

Did anybody ever tell you, you're an idiot. You must get off on making stupid comments. Give it a rest cunt, you sound like a broken record, same shit day after day. This is a one star story, bonnie said so.

I really liked the story. I really hope there will be more. One of my favorites of all time.

Don't listen to the idiots who read stories in LW hub, then talk shit because the story is about a cheating wife. Read the fucking LW description. Don't read stories from this hub if you don't want to read cheating wife stories. Cuckold is one of the top tags for the whole site, obviously people like cuckold stories. I would never read stories from mature or romance hubs because I don't like them. Don't read from LW if you don't like cheating wife stories, it really is very simple.

I say write what you want and like, and let dear annony go off like some nut job Loonie. When he explodes like he did in his comment below he acts like Daffy Duck going nuts over Bugs. I think he's funny and say eat shit and die annony you fag!!!. BTW dear annony, I gave this a 5

Only idiots comment on this site anymore. I mean bolt gun through the frontal lobe morons. Tags: mfm - cuck - hot wife....but baby whines that he wants a different story. Whaaa! Calls Charles Dickens, demands all the endings be changed. "It's not as fucked up as my warped atrophied brain is." So now Charles Dickens is a jackoff. 1 star. Whaaa! Demands condoms everywhere. Please put one over your imbecilic heads and tie it off. What utter unmitigated stupidity.

Disgusting piece of junk! Nuff said

Got to hand it to you, you really have an active imagination. Think maybe you have WAY to much time on your hands. Only one question... were you dreaming of being the husband or the two brothers..

We could all (almost) see the hand-writing on the wall ... but, the consummation of that hotwife event was right on time.

Loved it.

Pathetic nuff said

Neither of them seemed to have the character for these actions. Both young, naive virgins and suddenly he wants to see his girlfriend screwing other men? Where did those feelings and desires come from? And why would she suddenly decide that fucking multiple partners was a good idea? She's a college student so she's heard of STD's, Aids or Herpes. She also knows the chances of getting pregnant, pill or no pill. So why is she willing to take these chances. Does she really want to humiliate herself on her wedding day? One of the most important days in a woman's life? Not likely. And giving her husband to be that note after she walks down the aisle smelling like a brothel? You don't think her Father realized she'd just had sex? Hell, he wiped some cum off her face. He couldn't be that big a moron. Why doesn't Bob hand the note to her Father and say what any man would say in that instance - "I don't"? Couple other things. They aren't married (until the last the words). He isn't a cuckold. This is posted in the wrong category. It was a badly conceived and horribly written story about thoroughly disgusting people. Even for fiction their actions were ludicrous. No stars, as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star. It really deserves the lousy scores it's getting.

You just have to love the hypocrites who rail how immoral you are for writing a story when they are on a porn site reading the story. And they obviously read the whole thing! LOL I doubt they even get it. It always makes me laugh

Great story. Please keep writing, you are a good writer.

Love hot slut wimp hubbie stories

Interesting story but I was wondering throughout the story if it was an assignment and you had to have so many words or pages to complete the assignment. The gradual growth of the characters got a little to "gradual" for My liking. I was getting tired of reading about all the dancing and questions afterwards. I think just a couple of times would get the point across nicely. As for the cuckold stories and the "anons" out there.... ignore them. I still don't understand why they hate these kinds of stories so much BUT they still read them. I don't like Sci-Fi or Non Human or Mature so I stay away from reading in those categories...... HEY all you anons.... try THAT some time. Skip stories that piss you off.

3 stars.

Dump the bitch

It was nice of her to marry a mentally disabled guy like Bob.

Yourestilllafuckingidiot, creative.

May I suggest

yourstillafucktard

Yourstillfuckingbraindead

Yourstillanuntalentedpieceofshit

Just in case you're running out of ideas for intelligent communication.

I see anon's point. That's not really her. In the story she introduces the term. Earlier I interduced her to cock, pussy, fuck, as she read stories. I should have introduced the word and how she internalized the concept there if I was going to use it.

"and I'm proud to now have Herpes and Aids which I want to share with you". After hearing this her husband-to-be beat her face to a bloody mess and told her: "oh yeah... and I'm proud to leave your for your lovers, you filthy whore!"

An anon objects to the 2 shits calling her a slut. She is a slut so what's the problem?

I liked this story more than I do the usual cuckold/hot wife story. What made it hot was the POV of Cat, about how she slowly came around to enjoying her role as hot wife.

Good, until the final sex scene. The dialog turned into something in a cheap porn film. When Don and James started calling her a slut, that killed the story. Why? Because up to that point there was not the smallest hint of this sort of juvenile attitude. Cat was hot, they showed patience with her hesitation, it was all respectful.

When they started with the slut talk, I got the feeling that it was no longer Cat's POV. It wasn't even Don or James talking. It was Bob talking .. or, more accurately, the author fantasizing about what turns him on. The story failed to live up to it's own internal reality when the author's voice intrudes in such an abrupt manner.

Better than average build-up; failed ending.

I love how stories like this require that the parents be complete morons. A far more likely ending would be that one or the other of the parents went up to the room to escort their daughter down to the wedding. Upon seeing the two guys on top of their daughter all hell would break loose as the parents would assume that their daughter was being raped prior to her wedding. The daughter would then be in the position of having to either go along with the rape story or explain to her parents that no she was just f****** to random guys prior to getting married to the guy who wanted to watch her get f***** by random guys at which point the parents would have disowned her called off the wedding and throwing everyone out.

We can usually see what a glutton does to themselves, an alcoholic, a smoker, etc. And their sickness normally leads to suffering and early death. Sad. But those who actually encourage and celebrate sickness are not just sick, they are mentally unbalanced. You really think because a heroine user enjoys using heroine, that that makes is OK? This and all other stories that celebrate humiliation and abuse of marriage are detrimental to society, and therefor deserving scorn from civilized intelligent people.

You have a right to your sick perverted thinking. I have a right to condemn such perverted pleasure. The writer at least has the gumption to open his stories to unrestricted comment in an open forum. If you don't want to read comments that call you sick fucks out, don't read the comments in an open forum.

Mighty yummy, judges can go back to reading vanilla stories.

This is a good LW cuck story, you knew it going in. yet you keep reading these stories! Your a brain dead asshole,. I gave tis a 5 for effort and content.

A well written story, but the question here is: Why did she married him? I can understand a woman that after some years of married life founds out about her husband fantasy...Then she had to decide to divorce the man she really loves or enter the fantasy...A woman that isn't married, why the need to marry so young, if she is willing to fuck other men? With the note she showed that she wasn't a liar, but that from that moment on, she had lost all her respect for her future husband, and he understanding that, without respect there wouldn't exist love, would have left the church before saying the "I do"...1*

You told a great story. At any time, I could have left but continued to read. Thanks for a great cuckold fantasy!

This one was just the opposite.Even for fantasy there.has to be a shred of reality for the story to work This does not work on any level.Horrible dialogue .Ridiculous plotline.Lastly just to incredulous to be likable. This was just plain bad.Maybe next time.Like I said yesterday's story was fun This was simply inane.

different strokes for different folks. lots of scum in this world. another terrible day in loving wives. what else is new?

Negative points

Complaints when all parties are happy with the outcome? The guy wanted a hot wife, and got one. Some folks love these stories, some folks live these stories, some folks whine about these stories.

Don't worry about the whiners. Your story is hot and that's why you told it.

I love my wife and I still fantasize about watching her fucking and being fucked, sucking and being sucked. She is so hot when I tell her about it too.

Instead of slapping her I would spit in her face then give her the finger. I would keep that bird flying until I reached my vehicle.