All Comments on 'Wedding Dress Enlightenment Pt. 01'

Great start! Like most brides, I wish it lasted longer! ;)

Wow, really nice! Can't wait for the next chapter.

It stopped too early!

very badly written

It would be great when the story continues if you could get Kim to join in on the sexy fun.

Please continue thus lovely story 🤗

Wonderful start, hope the next chapter is here soon... Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

Such a beautiful lovely story!!! I hope there is more!!

Good start but too short, please have Jaymie and Stevie hookup in the next part!

Thanks for all the nice comments!

Constructive criticism would be nice instead of just “badly” written…

Next chapter is being written!

OMG this is an amazing start. Can't wait for the next installment.

I love wedding dresses and own lots of them, you are writing my fantasy xxx

Good opening!

can't wait for the next chapter. This is my dream

The context is well attacked/adopted.

As for constructive criticism . . . Please Proof Read carefully. I have seen an attack to do so here, on literotica.com, which entails:

Record yourself reading the story.

Play back the recording while reading along.

This will improve the accuracy of your proofing the text.

With the blips and typos out. I could rate this greater than the four ( 4 ) I gave this offering.

great story line cant wait for more.....

Very interesting... I'm all in on this story, and going in for chapter 2 now. As I get older, the cross dressing, Trans phenomenon is becoming very intriguing... Chicks with Dicks are HOT... Especially in a wedding dress, with professional make up!!

What a delciuos start to a story youve pretty much got me ensnared from the start , more please xxx