All Comments on 'Wedding Dress Enlightenment Pt. 03'

by Umbreon_97

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Anthony1965Anthony196511 months ago

Great story but Jayme needs to find a man that won’t leave in the morning.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Just being used can be hot, but would like to see Jaymie take control.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved the story so far and hope you will tell us more of Jaymie's wedding dress training, maybe a secret honeymoon for Jaymie and Stevie!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I think you need to find Jaimie another boy friend that shows her more respect and romance. The lustful fucking can be what she wants without being used as a cum dumpster. And will she start to think about becoming more of a women? But I do like your writing. Please continue the story.

KatiwantsKatiwants11 months ago

Mmmmmmmmm a wonderful story!! I believe Jaymie needs to find a real boyfriend who wants to be with her and not just a fucktoy for a drunken bum!!! He has no clue what he wants!!!

Kathryn65Kathryn6511 months ago

Oh please find the time to write some more you have me hanging on the edge of my chair ( top gear stylie ) praying that you will . I'd luv to have Jamie have breast implants and start a new life dressing each and every day . Thank you from sharing your imagination and craf with us all . xxx

Lucy688Lucy68811 months ago

I would love to read more of this story i would like to see Jaymie venture out and take control of her life as a woman

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

i loved your story I hope Jaymie will be used a hole lot more cant wait to to read more

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Skeve is an A hole he wants his cake and eat it too he has no compassion for a good coupling he should be kicked in a groin and put out to pasture until he realizes what he has done wrong

AarnCoralAarnCoral11 months ago

Great story so far. Hope you continue.

My expectations for Jaymie's future:

She goes out with the girls, seduces a guy, and they make love (not just sex like with Stieve)

She starts working at the saloon, and becomes 'one of the girls' - all the while dating the guy she met at the hen party

She starts HRT, and corset training. Gets a boobjob, and finally transitions fully to womanhood.

And the story could end with her again in the bridal dress - but this time for her own wedding.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Sounds like Steve has a problem he wants it at night but you don't want to be there in the next mor no he sounds like hes not very well-adjusted to life Maybe you can write another part of him coming and staying for the rest of his life being married to the person that he is married to and not just have an alcohol wanting to have sex how does the same way in a wedding night and the same way when he came later on he had to have liquor to give him courage he is a d*******

4Leather4Leather8 months ago

Mind blowing story. Steve is a pure dominate male that just wants to be in control get his rocks off now that he has found a slut in Jaymie's for his use. Love to see were this leads. Next chapter please.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

That was a great story please keep writing.And see were Steve and his best frieng go from this story. Maybe they relationship together will get strong and Steve and his best women will really want to tie the not.and live as a married couple.

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