All Comments on 'Wednesday Night'

So sexy! Good work!

Go to the Police and have them waiting for the ass on Wednesday night. He goes to prison and she has no problems. Dumb story.

Very hot! I really enjoyed reading this.

I'm not a fan of water sports so the squirting wasn't for me but everything else was really good! I want to know how it progresses, especially if she swaps shifts and frees up her Wednesday night entirely!

This is an excellent story. You have written well. Some idiot confused her squirting orgasms with water sports. You can't fight stupid. Ignore such criticism. Another critic suggests she call the cops. No woman could respond as she did without being totally in synch with her man and responding to the sort of stimuli she clearly needed. All he did was to teach her what she needed to be fulfilled. She just hadn't realised what she needed for sexual gratification. It likely isn't enough for a life-long relationship, but it opened her eyes to what sort of sexual life she really needs for real fulfilment. This was extremely hot and a job well done.

Very hot. I hope you're planning at least another chapter.

I really am confused by how often you find critics like the one that suggests she call the cops, in the nonconsent category. My goodness, this is exactly what we're here for. Nice work.

With all that squirting, why isn't she a dehydrated husk by the end? :3

This is so close to my fantasy... Only thing not included is the anal.

Loved it, I found the story most arousing and erotic.

I am so hot and wet. Better take care of that...

3 stars he was human enough to treat her equal atleast after the sex

in most of your stories women are degraded even though its the man forcing her eg the harsh anal with no lube or anal to mouth all in their first meeting she wasnt a stuckup bitch then why treat her like a degraded slut

and i dont like the romantic gesture just after degrading sex

he got what he want fucked her like $20 alley whore so whats the need to meet her again kissing her why all the flirting just leave her where he picked her thats it

it seems quite disgusting to treat a woman nice after just degrading and defiling her it wont change the fact that she is just a fucktoy to him

untagged a2m? you're such an asshole, pun intended.