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All Comments on 'Weekend Games - Memoirs.'

by The_Real_Mr_Grey

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Editor needed

Please get an editor.

What could have been an interesting story idea spoiled by mistakes.

P_AndererP_Andereralmost 3 years ago

I have an aversion to stories written in the present tense. They sound so contrived.

But I do like the sex game idea.

Yes, FFS, get an editor who knows how to translate this into a good story.

MelamoniMelamoniover 2 years ago

i love this kind of story.. i will love more like this.. it was good one

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