All Comments on 'Weekend Lover Ch. 01'

Ada, I hope you have chapter 2 ready to go, because I can't wait to read it!

OK, your usual style - snappy, fiery dialogues and loggerhead hero and heroine. Not bad but I think there are some words you have over used like; teasing, glared. You should use other words to express their way of speaking and also I'm not sure should men be 'saucy' when they speak. Doesn't seem very appropriate for a hunk? Overall it was not bad. Thank you ;)

Ooops, I see what you mean. It seems I need an editor or at least another read-through before publishing, and now I know exactly what needs fixing. <br>

Thank you so much, Sheera. You're a gem! <br>

Ada

I saw your name and hurried to read this first chapter right away! Mmmmmmm, that airport kiss was delicious. It's funny that their boss told them to take their "courtship" to the next level!<br><br>

Of course, in real life this would cause all sorts of employer headaches, but thankfully this is Literotica and we can all enjoy this wonderful romp.

Thank you for starting a new story. I was getting a little tired of some of the stuff that keeps showing up on here lately. It's great to have something to look forward to again. I love you style of writing, your stories always seem to be paced just right. Keep up the great work.

The story was summed up in the firt chapter. She wanted him but was embarressed to admit it. That didn't make him "cocksure" as she said, it made him right. I liked the repartee between the two and I could tell that you wanted to make a strong female character that was more than the mindless bimbos to often seen in Lit. and I congratulate you for succeeding in that. However, I didn't like that she lusted after him so openly despite the fact that she perceived him as an asshole. Beyond that, excellant work. Thanks for writing.

Was so glad you began a new story. I love your style, the fun in each story. PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!

please make sure that there is atleast a part 3!!!!!!!!

This is the first story of yours I have read, guess I will have to look at the rest of them, if they are as good as this one

I have been waiting for you to come out with another one.

i've been wait for another one of your wonderful stories this one looks promising,i mean really it jus started and i'm already itching for the next chapter

for you to submit again. Love your work and this has not disappointed yet again....can't wait until the next chapter

Cheers Cap

Great to read another story of yours!

*hangs around for more*

I loved the tension between the two characters and I hope you don't make us wait long for the next chapter to see what Dalen will do to win Abby's heart.

The second time around. There aren't any new posts that are catching my interest, so I decided to re-read some of my favorites.

I love the back-and-forth, witty exchanges. It plays like a Woody Allen movie. Great stuff. Thanks.

Good chemistry from the start.

What race are they

nice Story and 5 stars. i hope they find eachother after the Weekend.

Hmph. What's this thing about someone else setting up the couple together? Could just as well be a case where they actually have to work together by coincidence.