All Comments on 'Welcome Home'

Great idea. Make no effort to make your story even half believable then don't bother to read it after scrawling it down, mistakes and all.

A waste of space

I loved it.... we need more, maybe he gets a job and fucks his old teacher who is now his boss.

grammar errors, no plot development, 2d characters, for purely a stroke story I have read better. Think of this as a first draft. Revise it and breath new life into this potential story.

It was so badly written the eroticism didn't come out at all.<p>Fix it, run it past an editor, but for now it's just a trial run.

Full of spelling mistakes !! Who's Jamie. This writer is crap ,,