by complicatedfaery
and then.......the flashback is (nearly) completed and we fast forward to them in the car as Kit gazes lovingly at Calvin. Camera wideshot panning out of their car passing a sign reading, "Welcome to Temptation, An Easy Place To Get To And A Difficult Place To Leave."
--voice over--- "Next week on Temptation...."---
Camera Fade to Black
We're not even at Temptation, yet - so we're all waiting for more!
Lukas
I can't wait to read more. waiting in glorious anticipation
Loved that. Good story, well written and good atmosphere. Can't wait for a sequel :)