All Comments on 'Welcome to the Herd'

Aged 29, described as if in her 60's....?

Sorry. You lost me with the first paragraph. A woman in her late twenties is not wrinkled or beyond her prime. If her husband has passed, that makes her a widow, not a window.

You have the makings of an entertaining story. Good start, but you need to read through each chapter a time or two before submitting. Mistakes (like window, rather than widow) and typos can be jarring to the flow of any story. I for one would like to see more chapters submitted.

Love it, keep writing more please!

Interesting start. I'd like to read more.

I like the story, hope you keep writing so I can see where you take us, but you need an editor. The grammatical issues are distracting.

Love it can't wait fir the next chapter

Intriguing start, I am keen to read more. Keep up the good work

This could be REALLY good! please carry on

I like it! I was disappointed when it ended so I'd definitely like to see more, and I for one can suffer a few minor ("jarring" seems a little extreme) typos.

It is lovely..

Wonderful! Can't wait for the next one

Is a sequel coming soon?