by pdiddyd55
with a boner I thought I that I liked the story but with a more clear mind this series is pretty clunky and kind of hard to follow. the oscilation from first person to third person back to first person and then someone else's first person perspective is off putting.
Loved your story, what more could you ask for a joint and a big cock to suck.
Hope that Michael invites Jack in for another joint and uses that opportunity to once again get his dick in Jack's mouth! Would love to follow Jack's unwitting descent into being Michael's cocksucker!
Like how the two formed a bond. Being talked into sucking cock is so cool. I've acted shy and naive a few times like his was my first cock.
Nice romp. Love Michael's confidence and casual assertiveness. Is there more? But not write the dialogue conventionally?