All Comments on 'Well Played Ch. 03'

How could I not have seen it coming? And yet, when Aiden introduced Ben's date for the party, I shrieked. I don't want to spoil it for anyone, but it was perfect. Full circle; I never anticipated it.

Actually, I was more than ready for Ben to have his first threesome experience that same evening. I am very partial to that third party you have created so well. I don't know how involved these others will be in this series, but may I put in a small request for that configuration?

What can I say? This is so well written, so satisfying and yet full of suspense for all that you have laid the groundwork to happen next. Wonderful.

Well played indeed :)

I love this story so much! Great job. I'm really looking forward to the next post.

The unfolding details of Harper’s history are nicely interwoven with the current narrative. As a reader, my eyes tend to glaze and skim over big blocks of exposition. That said, hate Kate and thought Nate (too much? Sorry.) was quick witted in the moment. Bravo, Nathan.

Enchanted by the eight ball imagery. Amusing on so many levels.

I have to admit when Nathan said “three times,” I didn’t realize that was his admission. Despite the lack of a question mark, I thought that was his guess at how many times Harper had “played.” It was clearer on the second read.

“…still warmed by the froth of bravery” Nicely put.

The emails… for two people who have only shared one kiss, those were hella hot emails. Geeeeeez.

“…underwear made of candyfloss and barbed wire.”

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“I was sweating around the collar in a little noose of heat.” Great visual.

NO WAY! Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! (First time. *snorts*)

“…the whole hulking surface of me was alkaline desire.”

“wine-tainted laughter”

“…he's like my brother." *snigger*

“The lamp swallowed the room in a buttery glow;” Pretty.

“Her hair splattered the pillows like scarlet graffiti…” Gah.

Except for the fact that I would have dearly loved a listen to Harper and Nathan’s conversations, I just can’t find it in me to complain about that after these entirely entertaining 11,000 words. ;) The crossover characters were a lovely surprise! No better way to actually build Ben’s confidence, is there? Now go forth, young man, and conquer Nicole! The whole scene with Joseph was perfectly played, too, keeping Ben completely in character.

I continue to love the incremental movement of the relationship between Harper and Nathan. There is a possibility that by the time they actually act out their texts that my laptop will catch on fire.

I vote for novel length – if I get a vote. Thanks for making my Sunday afternoon. Now - I have to go find the hubby…

well done. Good characterization and good lines.

Thank you.

As usual! I definitely like how it's tying in with the events of Whored, with plenty of little in jokes for us fans.

I have to agree with other commenters though: Nathan makes my skin crawl.

this story is very well written. even though its missing some back story with nathan i believe that you have an amazing story on your hands here. please hurry and post the next chapter! i literally can't wait!!

Like a romance novel, but dirty... in a good way :) for whatever reason talk of Nathan has me imagineing Nathan Stark as played by ed quinn in the syfy show eureka... really really enjoy your work and will be checking back periodically for updates

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue writing this story. Please write the next story ASAP...

Please keep writing this story. It is 6 months since the last post1 Please do not keep up waiting much longer. Thanks you

This is, quite frankly, one of the most engaging, witty, sexy, clever and downright bloody enjoyable stories I have ever read on this site. I am in awe of your writing talent. Please continue.

Wow!!! I am blown away by this wonderfully written story!

From start to finish, your story drew me in and captivated me. I felt like I actually knew the characters, as though we were long-time friends.

So refreshing!

I absolutely cannot wait for the next installment! PLEASE, please, pleaseeeee finish writing this tale!!!!

Please write more! I love not only this series but also your "Cider Webs" story. Your conversations are delightful to read and you have also created some well-thought out characters to follow.

Your conversation writing is amazing, I love it when an author can write like this. It makes it so much easier to connect with the characters and all those word-plays cracked me up all the time!

Your characters feel extremely real too, and thoroughly likeable.

And the scene with Leila was hands down one of the hottest I've ever read and I always find myself surprised at the quality one can find on here.

Please do keep up the fantastic work!

Oh and by the way, is that a real song that's playing on the tv when Aiden comes to pick up Ben? Google couldn't help me and I always like to listen to music that's featured in a story :).

Gorgeous writer &your dialogues are out of the world , entire script/screenplay (it does read like a crackerjack TV serial )is tight , well-crafted -- a reader's /viewer's Delight !!

I hope this isnt the last part! i want to know what happens with Ben and Nicole and Harper and Nathan. Keep Writing! Amazing!

Hey everybody,

I am so sad this story is not finished - anybody know what happened to the author?

For those asking about the author: she is published now and I believe she writes under the names Lucy V. Morgan and Lime Craven.

Waiting for the next chapter...

Please update the next chapter!! This story is amazing! One if the best on this site!

Nicely done.